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The Epitome of Pity

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Just like the rest you are no different.
You faked it for your pleasure,
Now ignoring our torment.
I should of known this would happen,
My hopes were too high.
There's no other way to put this,
What I sing is my "good-bye".

Tell me the truth!
Is this what you intended?!
Throwing us to the side,
Knowing that is was all pretended.
Crushing our hopes,
Crushing our dreams!
Now impossible to trust.
Not everything is at is seems.

You can't find one word to even respond with.
You can fool me no longer,
Your words were just myths.
I should of never believed your lies.
Our dreams were too big.
You let us fall on our faces,
Believing your deceiving lips.

Your once broken heart infected your mind,
Persuaded to abandon us.
The infection has made you blind.

Tell me the truth!
Is this what you intended?!
Throwing us to the side,
Knowing that is was all pretended.
Crushing our hopes,
Crushing our dreams!
Now impossible to trust.
Not everything is at is seems!

Was it all out of pity?
Oh dear,
You should know that's YOUR epitome.


(*Instrumental)

I used to offer you my love.
Now all I want to is to feel your cold blood.
The desire to rip that stone out of your chest.
You should listen,
Honesty is all that I confess.

Can you see yourself?
Do you own a mirror?
If you would only realize,
You have become your greatest fear!


Tell me the truth!
Is this what you intended?!
Throwing us to the side,
Knowing that is was all pretended.
Crushing our hopes,
Crushing our dreams!
Now impossible to trust.
Not everything is at is seems.
I just really love this one. :la:

Well, what inspired this one was the song If You Think This Song Is About You, It
Probably Is by D.R.U.G.S. Other than that, no other inspiration came from this. Which
is actually kind of shocking because, usually, my good ones come from personal
experiences. Well, me thinking that this is good is only an opinion, you guys need
to tell me otherwise~.

The genre of just about everything that I write is along the lines of Rock & Punk Alternative.

Constructive criticism is welcomed~.
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MiyuxTheNobody's avatar
Is it sad, anytime I read your songs; I try and guess what you were inspired by?
I was like... HMMMM I CAN'T GET IT! :iconfffuuuplz:

Then I read your description and was like FML.